Angel of Death

I'm back! The children playing barefoot, boys with stripped, pink chests and the girls in the thin, dirty dresses. I'd nix the underlined 'the' The houses squat around, pale faced ...

Hey there Ky! Seems like I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a while. I didn't read the other comments, so sorry if I repeat anything. The crazy one/the daughter. ...

Hey Jare! Met to take a look at this a while ago, but I'm glad I decided to read it today. I liked it and really enjoyed it, mainly because ...

Hey there! I'm Angel of Death but you can call me Angel, and I shall be your reviewer today. This is quite a lengthy piece, so I might not be ...

Hey Cal, Dylan spent a longer time than usual in the shower, letting the extra hot-hot water beat out the kinks and knots born of her recent frustrations . I ...

Hey Ash! I'm sorry for not reading this a long time ago. I haven't been getting on as often as I used to but, I've finally read it and it ...

Sunny- I am at a lost for words. This was beautiful. I loved every moment of it and I was drawn in from the beginning and I couldn't stop reading ...

Hey Cal! I can't believe nobody has reviewed this yet but I'm here now! When Dylan pulled into the driveway, she told Marshall to wait, and that she would help ...

Hey there! I don't think we've met but I'm Angel of Death. Please, call me Angel, though. Okay, I quite liked this but I think it needs a lot of ...

Howdy Mars! I don't ever remembering reading any prose by you, so I will gladly review this for you. Okay! Snow blanketed the streets of Chicago, transforming the big city ...

Hey Ash! I could not resist! Every idea that you come up with is so great so I have no doubt that this will be entertaining. Plus, I read Evermore ...

Hey Ash! Thanks for the heads up! She laughed at my expression and stood, still luminous, as if she was glowing. She inclined her head to the empty spot beside ...

Hey Jiggy! It rested in shadow. I think this should be "It rested in the shadow(s)." The fire was small but fierce, heat pulsed through the room. Ah, I like ...

Hey Ash! I was so happy when you PMed me and told me that you posted the 13th chapter! Okay, time to start reading. It was as though I had ...

Hey Cal, I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a while. First off, lovely title. The hardest part, they said, was getting through the front door—which Martha found laughable because ...